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Just A Life Part 2

I was meeting Drake today, and it was good because theres nobody else in the house. Mum and dad took Ty somewhere. Line went out because she didn't want to spoil my day. And carry just went out for the sake of it. I was waiting by my front door on the stairs, I had one of my nicest pairs of clothes on. I had put on a romantic film for us and some popcorn. Mum and Dad said they'd be out all day with Ty, and I was to phone my sisters to tell them when they can come back. I shut Yap and Bang in the kitchen.
I was ready for action.
Knock knock
I stood up and looked in the mirror, I looked perfect. I walked over to the door, and opened it to see Drake.
'U look brilliant,' he commented.
'U too,' I smiled, 'Come in.'
He walked though the door, and looked around.
'Nice touch,' He grinned, 'Lets go up to ur room.'
He started climbing the stairs.
'No one else is in,' I grinned back.
'Great!' He beamed.
I walked into the living room and closed all the curtains. While wondering, is it love at first sight. We'll see.
He came and sat on the sofa, I sat next to him. And we fell into a deep kiss......
When we stopped, he beckoned me to sit on his lap. So I curdled up on his lap and we were in a deep kiss. Again. When we finally stopped I turned on the film.
'This films meant to be very good!' He smiled, 'A great choice!'
'Save your breath!' I told him, and we went into a deep, deep kiss.
After we watched the film we were snogging for ages. Then I broke it.
'Lets tell each other about ourselves,' I smiled.
'Ok,' he smiled back.
After about half an hour I knew everything there is to know about him, and he knew everything there is to know about me. We had quite a lot in common.
After all that I asked him what food he would like, I was hungry so I spose he would be.
'Ill come an have a look,' He said as he got up and joined me in the kitchen.
We had popcorn, sandwiches and coke.
He said he had to go home. So I waved to him from the door. He gave me one last kiss and went. That was a perfect first date.
I realised that Drake had left his coat, and I haven't got his number. So I called line and carry, they're always good in a crisis. After about 10 minutes Line turned up saying that carry can't come. Ugh, ah well, Lines better in a crisis. She said do I have anyone's number who has his. My reply: Nope. Do I know where he lives. My reply: Nope.
'Hang on,' Line burst out.
'What?' I asked hopefully.
'I heard him talking to Ady,' Line told me. Ady was his mate.
'And...'
'And.... Ady asked where he lived because of his birthday, in a couple of days!' Line said matter-of-factly.
His birthday?!?! Really, I didn't know!! Where does he live?!?! All these questions swirled around in my head.
'Where does he live?!?!' I asked her.
'Willow bridge road, number 8,' She grinned. Was she joking?? She must have read my face because she added, 'Not kidding!!'
I grabbed a carrier bag and placed the coat in it. I ran round to the garage and pulled my bike out of the pile. I waved and gave Line the thumbs up, she smiled back, then shut the door.
I shoved the bag carefully in my basket, next stop Drakes house, number 8 willow bridge.
I pedalled and pedalled until I got to number 8. I knocked on the door and waited. An middle-aged woman answered it. She had short blonde hair in a bob, two greeny-blue eyes and a friendly smile.
'Hello,' she smiled, 'Can I help u??'
'Is Drake there..... Mrs..?' I couldn't remember Drakes surname.
'Oh no,' The woman blushed, 'I'm Mrs Messige, Drake Walnut lives number 18.'
'Oh,' I stammered, 'Thanks, sorry for bothering u.'
She smiled and pointed to number 18, I nodded and went on my way and the door closed.
I reached 18 and knocked........
'Mum, can u get the door?!?!' Drakes voice called.
'You!!' Presumably his mum said.
'Ok,' He replied as I heard him climb downstairs to the door.
'Hi,' I smiled at him once he'd opened the door.
'Oh, hi,' He grinned, 'What brings u here??'
He looked all fancy and smart. STOP TRANCING IZZY!!
'You left ur coat,' I said as I gave it to him.
'Oh, thanks!!' He grinned again, 'Im going out for a meal with my family tonight so I needed to do my homework now. I hope u don't mind me cutting our date short.'
'Not at all'
And after that day we were the most popular couple in school.

17 years later.
Me and Drake have got married and had 3 children. Zack, Tom and Lila. We're very happy together. Oh, Line. She's got a husband called Alfie. They have little rosemary and Lines expecting another girl in a month.
Carry hasn't found love yet, but is a single parent to Joshua.
Ty has just proposed to his girlfriend Marcella, they have twins called Scarlet and Jesse.
All my mates are either getting married or married. We still meet up on Monday for movie night, at my house, because it's the biggest.
Mum and Dad are doing well, there fine. That's it I think. Oh yeah, and I got Drake a perfect birthday present, 17 years ago, a girlfriend!! He he.
Thanks for reading!!

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