Needing You.

HeatherAnne • 1248 followers

Nothing left
I've nothing left
Left sitting here
My heart's bereft.
So much lost
I've lost so much
I long for one:
Your needed touch.
Something more
Need something more
Don't leave me please
Don't slam that door.
Don't cut the lights
Don't hold your breath
I'll cherish you
Until my death.

#emotional-poetry #general #heartbreak #longing

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Comments & Feedback (12)

Mar 9, 2013 at 2:17 PM

Really like this one! The word repetition creates a feeling of desperation. Stellar job👏👏👏

Mar 9, 2013 at 2:18 PM

I agree, love this! 👏👏👍

Mar 9, 2013 at 6:20 PM

@BVHarding @emjez thank you both! 😊💙

Mar 10, 2013 at 6:49 AM

Nice, I think that the only time I've heard bereft used I'm this century , lol, your cool

Mar 10, 2013 at 6:49 AM

In this*

Mar 10, 2013 at 6:49 AM

A really old word , lets all keep it alive

Mar 10, 2013 at 7:20 AM

@wolfwaff paha it's cause I'm so rad

Mar 10, 2013 at 7:34 AM

Just have an outdated vocab , cause being a poet , and a fellow lover of poetry , words have an essence , and have struggled through dimensions of thought, just to hit the page of man, sad many languages I'll never hear are dying

Mar 10, 2013 at 7:34 AM

But you are pretty

Mar 10, 2013 at 7:34 AM

Rad

Mar 10, 2013 at 7:39 AM

@wolfwaff I was all 'I'm pretty!' ... 'Rad' xD do love a good outdated word, me.

Mar 10, 2013 at 8:08 AM

gewislicaly agrees

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