In Search Of The Holy Braille#2

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When I write
It doesn't come as freely
As I would like
My mind is at war
and Its for freedom I fight

An abundance of words
For my deliverance in verse
Within my mind
I acquire to find
A collection
Distributing perfection

Like a plug to a socket Creating the cause to shock it
Renounce to pounce on rhyme As in this world of mine

Time ceases
It no longer releases
Its chime

This battle I will fight
The words I wish to write

And in this timeless
World of mine
Time efficiency reigns divine

Then the direction

That magical collection Wondrous in perfection, Inhibits cause for protection

These words I intensely chase

Life is my lesson

The words
My hurt
My confession

My daily must do direction

Daniel Hing 22.10.12

#creative-struggle #general #introspection #poetry #self-discovery #writing-process

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Comments & Feedback (8)

Oct 25, 2012 at 11:31 AM

Love the flow of this 👏💗

Oct 25, 2012 at 11:38 AM

@sjw Thank you...thought in verse lol I truly believe somewhere out there there's a collection of words that can make even the most heartless of persons, stop and think ;)

Oct 25, 2012 at 11:41 AM

@HingAling24 I think your write words can be very powerful 😘

Oct 25, 2012 at 11:47 AM

Powerful at the least, hypnotic at best! Jus think of the times you get goosebumps listening to your favourite song! Why can't a song do that to you the whole way through! That's my philosophy anyways lol 👍❤😜

Oct 25, 2012 at 1:18 PM

@sjw did you mean, you write or your right?! Lol I responded to the latter 👍😜❤

Oct 25, 2012 at 1:18 PM

I like your poem it flows really wellXD

Oct 25, 2012 at 1:26 PM

@ilovepiggys Thank you 😀

Oct 25, 2012 at 4:17 PM

Lol you were correct to go with the latter! 😂😘

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