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To Him.

I want to go
Where warm winds blow
And no one knows my name

Where the sun always shines
And everything's fine
And I don't face the blame

Where the grass is green
A perfect scene
Far from the perils of home

Where I can choose
Just what I lose
I'm not hanging by the phone

Where friends are friends
And love never ends
And I won't be waiting for you

Where the people care
And life is fair
And the sky is always blue

Where I could live in peace
And the hurt would cease
At last I could be free

Where love never turns sour
There's no abuse of power
Like you did with me

I'm moving on now
I'll take a bow
I'm finally being myself

I'm going to a place
Where I'll never see your face
And I'll drink to my health!

I.Sparrow

IndiaSparrow

@IndiaSparrow

Strange swirling thoughts spin in my head and jump onto paper! 18 years young.

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Comments & Feedback (30)

Another style/structure experiment. I love messing with my poems to find something new to write with! Let me know if it works or if it's back to the drawing board 😜🌺

@IndiaSparrow great write. Hope he got the message... 😊

It's beautiful, really well written. Keep messing with them, it great☺🌺

@leelee101 I do too 😉❤

@Stablish thanks, so more experimenting is on the cards 😜💗

It make for the best poetry in my opinion😊

*Makes

@Stablish too true 😄🌷💛

@Delilah thanks for the repost 😊💜

Sounds a good place😌

👍 love this structure and rhythm 👍

Beautiful I love your work whatever style you do 😽

This is just lovely...a tad sad but stunning:):)

I loved this poem!

It works! I like simpler poems like this. (not saying it was simple to write, just that it was easy to read!)

@eddie12309 @Burrfoot it was quite nice in my mind 😊

@Burrfoot Idk what happened there... Thanks for your comments!

@sjw @misslittleDHP thanks you two, you always make me smile with your comments 💗🌸😄

@nikujagagirl @Nom thanks! And if anything I find simple harder to write, I have less places to put the same amount of images! 😜

@IndiaSparrow your write are just stunning...you transport into your poems...just love how you do that!

I can't type today @IndiaSparrow ...lol....I'll interpret...your writes transport me into your poems....phew apologies my sweet xx

This is such a wonderful poem! Love it!!

Your welcome hun! You rock!! 💞

@misslittleDHP saying that a writers work really does "take you there" is possibly the highest raise I could ever dare dream if! Thank you so much 😄😘

*praise

@GroundB thanks 😊

@IndiaSparrow my pleasure...I speak from the heart :):)

Agh! Top Opuss of the day! woop woop 😄

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