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Chapter 1 - Aibileen

I click on to Microsoft Word, search down the long lists of discarded books that stretches back for years, since I was 6 years old and had begun to write. I sigh when I see the first story I ever wrote. I read through it, wondering how I ever managed to write such a bad story. It is riddled with spelling mistakes and is about 2 pages long. My grammar was terrible and the story is lacking even an average plot. I click back onto my current story and begin typing. Rain slowly rolls down the windows. I gaze outside, watching, the pitter patter against the pavement, when suddenly I see a pale boy outside my house. I look again and but he's disappeared. Just my imagination, I tell myself. But I can't help the nagging feeling that something's not quite right.

KittenPaws

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I love cats, dogs, Harry Potter, blue, chocolate and books! ;) I am 12 years old, and I hate maths. I have an amazingly cute dog, but I want a cat too, even though my dad hates them!

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@aprilmayjune I finished the next chapter

Love it!

Thnx! I think I've liked most of your stuff! It's all amazing

Omg! My intro is 10 on the top today story list!!!

@KittenPaws Haha : ) Good for you! It deserves to be up there!

Thank you so much! Your stuff is amazing, too!

@KittenPaws there is no such category. Your story was the 10th most recently posted story.

Yes there is, seeing as no. 1 was posted 15hrs ago @blindsilenfe

@blindsilence yes there is seeing as the no.1 was posted 15 hrs ago

@blindsilence Actually, yes, there is a Top Story list. If you go to Top Today and filter by story, then the intro to this story is no. 10

Exactly, thank you @aprilmayjune

@AprilMayJune ha ha, so there is. I stand corrected. I just got got.

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