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And I Died...

I've never written like this... They're just sudden words that spilled out of my brain:

You
Hold
Me
With
Your
Icy
Stare.
Can't
Move.
Then
You
Grab
Me
And
Throw
Me
Out
Into
The
Icy
Cold.
The
Icy,
Forbidding
Cold.
And
I
Freeze
Slowly,
Bit
By
Bit
And
My
Cold
Heart
Stops
Thumping
And
Shatters
Into
A
Thousand
Pieces
And
I
Die
From
Heartbreak.

Klaire

@Klaire

Gone for a month. (or more)

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Comments & Feedback (10)

Oh

Beautiful and I like the one word line idea.

This is very powerful. The one word a line works so well. โœจ๐ŸŒŸโœจ

@sleepydragon @Pawsy Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜ Nd for the sweet RPs too.

@sammielee46 @sarahgamel Rhank you for the generous reposts ๐Ÿ˜˜โœจโค

@chickgamer Thank you for the repost! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜

*thanks

Oh My Gosh! I love this type of writing!!!!!

Btw, I liked it.

@lucylilac Thanks!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜ Glad you did ๐Ÿ˜

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