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With And Without You

With you, the sun doesn't seem to shine
You maintain a distance when most would entwine
With you, the nights are lonely and long
We pretend that it's right when plainly, it's wrong
With you, togetherness seems a chore
Stilted, at best, yet we choose to ignore
With you, flowers bought to colour the room
Seem to decay and just add to the gloom
With you, my soul says its seen kinder days
My head and heart argue over one who strays
With you, I've never known a colder bed
Time to admit we're officially dead.

Without you, it seems the same, more or less
But with one added extra.
Happiness...

leelee101

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Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Comments & Feedback (27)

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Ouch πŸ’” u woke up on the wrong side of bed today Lee. Soppy Lee is taking over today? A beautiful sad write πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Lovely write mate....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΊ

Great rhythm

Ouch! what kind of dreams were you having last night! it's sad but beautiful πŸ˜˜πŸ’›πŸ‘

@sjw cheers hun, just where the pen led... I had an idea of the with and without being able to work either way, not sure it's totally right though... Never mind! πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sjw thanks for reposting Sie 😘😘

@jackalice thanks Jack nice one. πŸ‘ Thanks for the RP too β˜•β˜•

@sammielee46 appreciate the lovely RP Sammy πŸ‘ thanks hunny ❀😘

@HeatherAnne thanks for reposting feefee πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@patdolan83 nice one mate, cheers 🍻 and thanks for the RP too πŸ‘πŸ‘

@chickgamer yeah.. Never mind, thanks for the RP LJ πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sarahgamal ha no I'm alright hun! It's just where I've been led today. ❀❀ Thanks for the rp hunny πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

I think it works but how about clarity instead of happiness? Just a suggestion 😘

@sjw hmm no I think I like the harshness of happiness in this context hun. Thank you πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

I won't be copying this and sending it to my bird lol πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘

@glen ha probably best not mate! πŸ˜‚ Cheers for reposting fella πŸ‘πŸ»

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for reposting sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Great, but sad. Hope this doesn't relate to you. Sorry if it does. ❀

@paintingskies no I'm good hun, thank you. ❀❀ All fictional. πŸ‘πŸ‘

Nicely written Sir🍻🍻

@Stablish cheers fella, and thanks for the RP, nice one. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»

It's about Bob, isn't it? Ha ha! A really touching poem buddy - top notch! πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΊπŸΊπŸΊ

@TheCodsPollocks cheers fella. I'll have to put a # on the Bob pieces...πŸ‘πŸ˜‚ Thanks for reposting Jimmy mate πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»

@misslittleDHP thanks for reposting Kim πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

This is lovely!!!

@Amellia aah glad you enjoyed it, thank you. πŸ‘β€

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