You're the rain I want to dance in,
Though I know I'll catch a cold.
You're the music that is on repeat yet still not getting old.
You're the fire that I play with,
Without care for getting burned.
You're the lesson I've been taught a hundred times,
But never learned.
You're the safety and the danger.
You're the one I can't forget.
I know my foolish heart will be the death of me yet.
Your feedback helps Legs understand what's working
Rearranging words into some sort of shape as they tumble from my mess of a heart.
I don't need your love. I don't need you very much. I just want you right now. I want your touch. you don't have to love me. you don't have to care. just let me have you. I'm willing to share.
This place is a hole but I don't wanna go. I wish we could stay here forever alone. I stared for a while and waited for words. Seen but not heard. My tongues turning black but I won't take you back.
And if I were to ever let you go, my life would be at peace. Ha. A funny thought darling. What would I do without a bloody chin. I would probably see through a clear lens, Instead of this blue shade.
I. Hate that I love you. Hate that I need you. Hate who you pretend to be. I. Melt in your arms. Gasp at the fire in my soul. Hold you as though I know you. You are a drug. You are dangerous.
I'm weak, pathetic,. I depend on you to feel. Like I'm worth anything,. You can build me up,. A desperate leaning tower,. Then crush me with a smile,. Drain me of all power,. Tear me limb from limb.
Is it a bad sign that I have a song about a guy cheating on a girl and then trying to get her back stuck in my head.
There's alarm bells ringing, But what can I do. There's fish in the sea, My fish had to be you. Alarm bells were right, You're nothing but trouble. An angry, painful lover, Made to burst my bubble.
You're gonna break my heart By fucking me over There'll be a few days afterwards Where I'll avoid being sober But I'll be sure to break your heart too Altho I don't know what I'll have to do For you...
Sorry , what I meant to say was 'I don't know I should be giving advice, but I would just say that reading your work back is so so so important, to check the rhythm and pace.
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