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Little Kestrel

On, little Kestrel, away you fly;
Catch the wind and soar on high.
Flit along on wings of song,
Beyond the bounds of mortal rule.
Let no evil do you wrong,
Nor persons seek to ridicule.
With swiftest sight, and ears so keen,
Evade the chains that you descry.
Heed no jester, king or queen,
Go, brave Kestrel, away you fly.

LuciusDei

@LuciusDei

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This is lovely and I like the simple format rhyme structure. ๐Ÿ’š

Love this! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค

I second what @eddie12309 said!! This is beautiful!! I am completely blown away! ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

Thanks for the lovely feedback, folks. I should explain a little about this poem. It is a short nursery rhyme from my novel-in-progress. It was told to my protagonist, Kestrel Daystar, by his mother.

Really lovely ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ‘

Excellent ! I love kestrels. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘