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Deep Breath

LukaB • 147 followers

Sometimes I can't take a deep breath, apparently it makes things alright.

I never feel relaxed, always tense and on the verge of collapsing, i'm not worried about anything.

My friends used to try and make it better, now they just ignore me, I can't understand that.

I find myself lost, my soul an everlasting epitah, am I invisible? Do I lack what makes me who I am?

Maybe it's just faith, faith that led me to the end of the road, faith that left me weeping on the floor.

Will someone solve my mystery? Only time will tell, but for now, These are my last words...

#existential-crisis #inner-struggle #mental-health #proverb

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