Rescue

minxyMolly • 498 followers

I'm scared of looking the fool,
But I fear I already am.
What the hell should I do,
When life throws you in the deep end of another pool.
I'm swimming with all my might,
Trying to keep my head up a little bit longer to survive.
But I'm tiring inside,
Is it worth it to keep up this seemingly pointless fight.
So I'm letting go of control,
Just drifting downwards below....

Will I be rescued?

Find some hidden inner strength?

Or shall I just drown to my death?

I'll find out soon enough, I guess....

©minxyMolly

#existential-crisis #general #inner-struggle #mental-health #metaphorical-drowning #survival

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Aug 27, 2012 at 7:37 AM

'Rescue'. Sad stuff MM 😢❤

Aug 27, 2012 at 7:44 AM

@leelee101 thank you, 💗👍 for title help 😊 and for RPing 😘😘

Aug 27, 2012 at 8:05 AM

Welcome sweetheart 👍😉💋

Aug 27, 2012 at 8:31 AM

I vote for inner strength 💚💙❤💜 hugs

Aug 27, 2012 at 9:49 AM

@naaviie I agree hugs back 💗💜💙💛😘😘

Aug 27, 2012 at 10:05 AM

Inside you are always as strong as can be. Hold on to that thought hun. 🌟💛✨

Aug 27, 2012 at 10:46 AM

@sleepydragon will do thank you 💗💗😘😘

Aug 27, 2012 at 12:25 PM

@sjw thank you hun for RPing 😘😘

Aug 27, 2012 at 12:42 PM

@minxyMolly your welcome ❤

Aug 27, 2012 at 3:33 PM

@jamtots thank you Jam man for RPing 😘😘😘😘

Aug 30, 2012 at 10:06 AM

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Aug 30, 2012 at 10:08 AM

@RichWithey :') thank you for the caring words 😘 and the RP 💗😘

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