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Down But Not Out

Words locked inside my mind
Not sure what I did this time
Pausing memories intense
Feeling emotions I'm up against

Well I just don't know anymore
Drinking and sleeping on the floor
Freezing heart beats no more
Agonising pain now for sure

No one around to save me
Outsmarted games to feed
Cheap cider cans all around
Smell of death seeps from ground

A light shines under the door
Tasting fear some more
Death stands with shiny steel
Says he wants to battle my will

Crawling across the floor rising up
Handing over a blood filled chalice cup
Wrists haven't yet been cut
Screaming now I have had enough

A grin appears on his face
So now I'm better placed
Said he will be back again
Told him, "bring it on my friend."

Replenished and showered
Washing away the coward
Took a hard look in the mirror
Reflected a fearless winner

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Freaking awesome as ever haha always has to be down never out gorgeous πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

@aleishagayle20 hahaha thanks and yep fall down, get back up fighting πŸ‘

@smellyfingers best way to be hot stuff πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

Fight all the way Mr Fingers! 😜

@smellyfingers awesome. Carry the fight sir 😊

@naaviie think I'm shadow boxing hahaha πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š Lmfao ☺

@leelee101 thank you my king. ☺

Haha! Damn man, how do you do it! I interrupted my boxing poem for this!!!

@smellyfingers I think we think similar stuff!! Haha! I think we may be brothers! Jeremy Kyle!

@Weirdwolf Hahahaha could well be, past life connected again? Can I go on Jeremy Kyle with my mask on? Hahaha πŸ‘

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Awesome stuff mate πŸ‘πŸ‘

@DamianBlack thank you πŸ‘

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