Hey guys so I've been given the task of setting the next emotion for the series of poems competition thing. It's great fun and well worth giving it a go. The emotion is HEARTACHE just tag me, @NickyX in the comments and #emotion so I can view them. All entries must be in by 6pm tomorrow. Good luck :D
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@RCLOL similar to #household, only with emotions... Can be style of writing inspired by the emotion and doesn't have to contain the word
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