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Cobwebbed Love

Gently you took me by the hand
As though it were a sin
I could feel your pulse beating
Underneath your skin

And then you led me up the stairs
As I gripped your fingers tight
Intrepid explorers, we go
Into darkness from the light

And then we sit upon your bed
With just our palms we touch
Endorphins pop as I realise
I love you very much

And then we lay back on the bed
And hold each other near
Our eyes speak words louder than
The silence that we hear

Years pass by, we still lie here
Cobwebbed, but together
Frozen in our own time
Of a love that lasts forever.

All rights reserved. Nom 5th September 2012.

Nom

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Life's a mystery.

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Comments & Feedback (19)

Lovely stuff mate. πŸ‘πŸ‘

Awww how romantic... πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’šβ€ nice to see your work 😊

Simply beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’—βœ¨πŸ’—βœ¨πŸ’—βœ¨πŸ’—

@leelee101 thank you :)

@naaviie I haven't given up yet :) thx :)

@misslittleDHP ☺ thank you

That's what I like to hear πŸ’šβœŒ

Like it mate 🎸

Lovely. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@glen @eddie12309 thank you :)

Brilliant-the last stanza is pure beauty 😌😘

Beautiful❀❀❀❀❀

@Fly10 you're back! I need to catch up on your work then :). Thank you, I feel I could write another whole poem exploring the idea in my last stanza, a kind of sleeping beauty. Glad you liked it.

@sarahgamal thanks :)

I believe there's some distance in that! Creates all sorts of imagery in my mind-like two souls frozen in time, but with love still very much alive😌 Only back intermittently at mo, & haven't written anything much for SO long. It's only like now when I check in, that I realise how much I miss itπŸ˜” Hope all well with you & that exams were a πŸ‘?x

@Fly10 it was the cobwebs that did it for me, plus the idea of being so deeply in love with someone that it would be enough just to hold them forever (ie no sex). Glad you're back, I've been a bit sporadic too. And good news I passed my exam so I'm fully qualified now! Such a relief. :) thanks for remembering. How's things with your business?

Financially getting (slowly) back on track....but lost of dirty dealings uncovered, so still trying to address best way to deal with all that. In middle I redundancy process too, so not pleasant πŸ˜” I'm optimistic though & my glass SHALL remain half full! And the holding someone forever being enough? Can definitely relate to that. Good to be back in touch & hope we'll be back to reading more of each others work before long 😌x

@Fly10 glad everything is slowly slotting into place for you. Can't wait to start reading your work again. Glad you're almost back :)

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