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Sweet Release

Anna looked at herself in the mirror
Her finger tracing letters etched on her skin
Her mind; a jigsaw shaken up
Desperately seeking the person within

She longed for the friction inside to end
Longed for death; an eternal peace
She waded as driftwood, out to sea one day
Let herself go into death's sweet release.

@naaviie Six word challenge.

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@naaviie great word choices!

Awe, so sad, drifting... Great write!! 💚😘

@naaviie thank u and for RP!

@ckahn I apologise for the similarities! I promise I didn't copy, but I guess yours inspired mine, subconsciously!

So cool! I love the way our themes are similar but written so differently. It's beautiful! 😘👍

@ckahn thank you! The suicide theme did come before I read yours! But I do love how the words have been interpreted so differently. Thank you for the RP.

Wow brilliant 😊

Brilliant 👏👏

@Delilah @misslittleDHP thank you and for RP too

Thank you @sjw for the RP

@Nom your welcome 💞

@sjw :)

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