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The Wave

We cried; our tears were dripping in the water
Tears for our lives, destroyed by the wave
Tears for the ones we knew who were lost
Tears for the ones we hoped could be saved

Our wounds were cut deep, from the power of nature
Yet emotional pain numbed physical feeling
Forged bonds with strangers, united in terror
And yet this humanity, began the healing

And when I heard that my eyes had not lied
That the waters had snatched you away from me
I cried a thousand oceans over
For the love I had lost, so definitely.

All rights reserved. Nom 13th January 2013.

Loosely inspired by the film 'The Impossible'.

Nom

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Life's a mystery.

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Beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’

@sjw thank you :)

Oh yes. I heard that the film was extremely good, but of course I'm not allowed to watch it since I'm only 11. πŸ˜– Superb stuff πŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

Love this so very much πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Awesome mate πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Final stanza is just astonishingly beautiful πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Œ

@Klaire it's a 12A so you can watch it with an adult. However it is very harrowing and sad. Thank you

@sarahgamal @leelee101 thank you :)

@Fly10 oh thank you ☺

@Nom My parents would probably not let me watch it even if I was 16. πŸ˜œπŸ˜–

@Klaire sounds like you have good parents :)

@Nom Christian parents and yes good ones at that 😊

@Klaire don't take them for granted :)

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