It's Melancholic...

Rawren • 86 followers

My dearest friend, it's been a while,
Eves of many from that smile.
Let me know what you adore,
Are you the same as long before?
Now more than ever, do you feel alive?
Could you possibly have a will to survive?
Have you a love for everything great?
Or are you still stuck in your sorrowful state?
Leave me a letter, a note or a sign
You know I will help you whatever the time.

#acrostic #emotional-poetry #friendship-letter #general #introspection

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Rawren

Mar 6, 2013 at 4:03 PM

@shaheenashapeenur

Rawren

Mar 6, 2013 at 4:08 PM

@shaheenashapeenur a true (and sad) piece that's fruitless in it's favor

shaheenashapeenur

Mar 6, 2013 at 4:57 PM

@Rawren @Rawren It's brilliant and fits the theme perfectly, and you're right, it's sad but portrays your feelings perfectly👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😘

shaheenashapeenur

Mar 6, 2013 at 4:58 PM

it portrays your sadness cleverly)

leelee101

Mar 6, 2013 at 5:19 PM

Nice one hun. Great piece 👏👏❤😘

LiSaC64

Mar 6, 2013 at 5:27 PM

👏👏👏🌹

Rawren

Mar 6, 2013 at 5:34 PM

@shaheenashapeenur @leelee101 @LiSaC64 thanks all :) I wanted to try to include the feeling in both the view of how I felt about it as well as the other person, but I didn't think it came out as 'melancholic' in regard to how I felt. But I'm glad you guys can tell ❤😘