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You said it's nice to meet you.
I said thanks.
You said how are you?
I said fine.
You grinned and winked at me.
I flushed red.
You said I like your hair,
I said thanks.
You said had a good day,
I said fine.
You smiled and took my hand.
I flushed red.
You said your shoes are cute,
I said thanks.
You said lets get a drink,
I said fine.
You put your hand upon my knee.
I flushed red.
You picked up my bags,
I said thanks.
You said lets go to mine,
I said fine.
You said lets go to bed,
I flushed red....

Ria1984

@Ria1984

Diet coke addict, pixie hunter.

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There you go! Love it hun, inspired yourself, well done! 😘

@leelee101 I blame you actually... Lol. I was gonna say you were the inspiration but that would've sounded dodgy!

@Ria1984 heh! I'd be flattered! But you're right... Hey don't thank me, you did it hun! Just keep 'em coming! 😘

@Ria1984 heh! I'd be flattered! But you're probably right... Keep 'em coming Hun! 😘

Love it, really cool words 😊

Perfect! Love it!!

Awwwww😄

Sweet 🌹🌹

"You took put your hand on my knee" remove the 'took'

This poem is so sweet and romantic and flowed beautifully. 🌹💓🌹

@redfae it was originally you took my hand.... Then I changed it, thanks!

That's not sweet redfae, it's just a classic conversation only better

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