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Welcome To The Madhouse...

Let me tell you a story of a
place I know well,
It's drab and it's filthy and hotter than hell,
The paintwork is peeling, the decor is grim,
Clientele unfeeling and impossibly dim.

It's where people go to forget about life,
To meet up with women (but not with their wife)
To gulp from a glass with a lipstick stain,
To cackle and weep, to get pissed again.

Because life is nothing without a stiff drink,
It numbs the brain, makes
it harder to think.
You won't dwell on the farce your life has become,
You don't care that you're broke, that you live in a slum.

Youth and age mix in this hazardous den,
The beautiful and foul, and so many old men.
Gossip spreads like disease through the chattering throng,
"Have you seen who he's seeing?" "I know, isn't
it wrong?"

The barmaid sees all with her watchful eyes,
She looks at the clock, 10 more minutes, and sighs.
Last orders is coming, the hour is late.
Her ankles are killing, her hair's in a state.
"Day off tomorrow", she thinks with a grin,
Better make mine a very large gin!

Sophie0311

@Sophie0311

I like reading lots of nice things, particularly poems and fantasy fiction, thought I might like writing some.

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A veracious portrayal from the perspective of the observerπŸ˜” Excellent piece πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜‰

Haha ace work! πŸ’š

Thank you very much :-)

Brilliant I really like this:):)

Thank you, thanks for the reposts too :-)

Just so you know, in order for people who've commented to be able to read your response, you have to 'tag' them by including their user name. This enables your reply/comment, to show up in their feed. All you have to do is open the comment box, but before you start typing, just tap on their username at the end of THEIR comment, & hey presto! it'll appear in your comment box & tag them automatically. Lots of people, including me, have been caught out on this one, & often wonder why no-one responds to their comment! Try it now in response to this if you wish! πŸ˜„

@Fly10 Thank you very much for the advice! Got it now :-)

Re RP, you're very welcome. I only do that for pieces I feel deserve it & should be shared-yours definitely did πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Œ

@Fly10 Thank you, your work is brilliant, reading lots of it before I went to bed wasn't good though, couldn't stop thinking about them!

Hey-you got it! Just ask if anything else you have query with. And thank you so much for taking the time to read my work-it means a lot. I always appreciate new followers, but I don't do the follow me/follow you thing. I always tend, like you, to read through a persons back catalogue & that way I can decided if we have any common ground, or whether I can appreciate their work in other ways. For example, although I enjoy quotes & jokes, I wouldn't follow someone who only posted those, as personally, it's just not for me & I'd find it difficult to give positive feedback. Second reason for reading through old work, is to pick up on any gems I've missed! I can the then like, comment, repost or all three! This is obviously more difficult if there are hundreds of previous posts, but even then, a quick scan through gives you an idea of whether it's for you. That's just the way I do it anyway! I'll check my feed now, as always reply to comments left-again, really appreciate you taking the time to bother 😌😘

@Fly10 Yeah I agree, thanks for your help! :-) x

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