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7 Colours, 7 Haikus

The colours I'll need.

Splashdown

@Splashdown

Ok, time to update this... 17 now, and still writing an (as yet unnamed) fantasy book - and have recently discovered a knack for writing haikus. Doing sciency stuff at college, and will possibly join the writers union some time in the future... Motto? The proof of the pudding is in the eating... Or something like that... Gosh this is a long bio... I'd better stop now...

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#colour Sinking Down Forever. Beauty So much beauty. Down these eerie waves Fornever.

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Splashdown set the colour challenge to Sunset Orange But only 3 people wrote one Please try, we need more entries Remember to tag it #colour and tag @splashdown in the comments Thanks We need to...

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Blue

#colour The color blue, Is sometimes used to, Express being sad, A bit like red is mad. But blue is the sky, The thing that doesn't die. Blue is the gem, Mending the hem.

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#colour Ashen thoughts And ashen dreams Ashen skin Torn at ashen seams Ashen memories Of a bright blue past A past that burned To piles of ash.

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#colour V iolet says midnight, says starlight. I rises of violet, strong with intent. O f dark mystery and cold shivers. L ife to live a message it brings. E erily beauty, love of light.

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Comments & Feedback (13)

This is excellent. πŸ‘πŸ‘ You're a couple of syllables out in places, but I'm not composing. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great stuff πŸ‘

@Splashdown that should be complaining not composing! πŸ˜‚

Oops! πŸ˜… I suppose it's how you say some of the words but still... πŸ‘‹ @leelee101

@Splashdown don't worry, it's plenty good. πŸ‘πŸ‘

@leelee101 Thanks! 😊

Beautiful stuff 😜 lovely haiku

All syllables in place 😝

@KANS Thanks!

Also thanks @sjw fro the Rp!!

A worthy winner. Well done. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

@eddie12309 I agree, most definitely! Loved this, what a great idea πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@eddie12309 @MrsS thank you so much!!! πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜„

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