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Falling Down

The stars are falling down

Right from out the sky

You laugh instead of frown

You laugh when we all cry

The planets are colliding

You love the way it sounds

It fills you up with pride

When to us it's just confounds

The stars are falling down

The planets are colliding

You smile like your a clown

You smile

I find this frightening

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Nice write mate. Tightrope between light and dark Stablish? 👍😊

@leelee101 I had people in mind, like governments and organisations who don't seem to care. This was one of those end of the night sleepy ones, I'm doing a start to the day sleepy one now😉, I'm getting some ideas back at last🙏

@Stablish keep 'em coming bro 👍😊

Freaky clowns!!! But excellent write very crazy and insane clowns! 😱😱😱😱

@MrAlex Creepy clowns,😱 I'm going to keep doing the weird poetry for some 'Dave' inspiration😜 got a few poems on the go at the moment, one nice fluffy one though☺

@Stablish oh sounds good!!!

Ooooo spine-tingling! And yes I agree with @MrAlex creepy clowns! 😲

Like this a lot. It definitely walks the line between light and dark 😉🌟

@naaviie Ha ha, writer hate clowns, they scare me😲

@jojo72 Thank you, I always seem to write better when I'm falling asleep. I have another similar one but I will save it for a while, thanks for the comment😊👍

@Stablish 😖😲 to darn scary!

This is fabulous...really like it muchly 😃😃😃

@misslittleDHP Thank you very much☺🌹🌺🌹🌺✨🌟

I've missed your work since I've been gone! This has certainly been a nice post to come back to :)

@renagade146 Thats really nice of you to say☺, it's been up and down though, I've only just started posting fully again, I had a very uninspired few days, it's all good now though, hopefully. Welcome back, it's good to hear from you😃

Is it weird that I sang it to a really happy tune? O.o really well written, by the way! :)

@KitKat No, well I don't think so, I'm just happy you were singing it😃 Thanks for the comment👍

@KitKat @Stablish I sang it too! Great poem!

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