Goodbye Kiss

Stablish • 1364 followers

'Please don't cry'
'This ain't goodbye'
Well why's my smile amiss?
This feels like a goodbye kiss,

'We'll meet again so soon'
'And forget this moments gloom'
But your touch sends me amiss.
This feels like a goodbye kiss.

Our paths will cross again some day, you say,
My fear? We're going to different ends of the highway.
So on our last hug, I reminisced,
And then what felt like, a goodbye kiss.

My heart beats true for you,
Without you I'd be blue.
Your lips I'll deeply miss,
It felt like a goodbye kiss.

Stablish™
Response to @SarahGamal's poem 'This Ain't A Goodbye Kiss'

#emotional-poetry #general #heartbreak #love-and-loss #separation

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:24 AM

Bravo 👏👏👏 love it ❤❤👏👏👏😘

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:26 AM

Awe, thank you, I just get the urge to respond some times as well lol. This is the first time I've written up a poem on paper before posting, it's quite a good feeling doing it old school. Your welcome to respond to any of my soppy ones any time ❤❤❤😘

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:27 AM

@sarahgamal 👆👆👆

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:27 AM

Nice reply mate, well done. 👏👏👍🍻

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:29 AM

@Stablish will hunt ur past then and see what it triggers. Still it's a bit sad/soppy ur response I have to say but well written

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:32 AM

@sarahgamal Yeah I just started writing and went with it really, I had something slightly sinister in mind but SoppyStab™ took over again lol

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:48 AM

@leelee101 A new ™For you LMFA 😂😂

Jan 18, 2013 at 11:50 AM

@Stablish it'll be SoppyStabby™ I think mate. I likey! 😂😂

Jan 18, 2013 at 12:03 PM

I love this 👏👏👏😘

Jan 18, 2013 at 5:17 PM

@sjw Awe, thank you kindly💜💚💙😘

Jan 18, 2013 at 5:18 PM

@leelee101 I'm sold sir🍻💙🍻

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