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Love Forever Waits

If heavens here on earth,

It's there in your embrace.

I've been waiting here since birth,

Just to see your face.

Your so beautiful it scares me....

That your lips I will never taste.

And i don't think that there will be ....

No one else here to take you place.

But If the world stops here today,

I know I won't be afraid,

Because there's a voice inside that tells me,

That my love forever waits.

XSTABLISHX

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (37)

That's lovely!

@PoppyA Thank you so much, it's my first time doing a soppy one lol, wasn't sure about putting it out there.

Nice :)

@pchinnery Thanks mate, might have to turn it into a bigger song if i get more good feedback. (-:

You should! I wonder how many men will be taking note of it to put in next valentine's day!

*put in cards

@Stablish ha, at least if they do i know it must be good, better complete it and record it before someone steals it. Lol , thanks again for liking it, all the positive comments just makes my writing improve. Hope you have a Lovely day (-:

Lol

Beautiful mate, you old romantic! ;)

@Stablish Awesome! Your the best at poetry :D

Haha, you too! x

@DaddyDooDahs @RedWednesday Thank you, was just thinking if I could still find the words, obviously i can (-: just need to meet someone to sing or read it to now.

You surely are in love boy !

Ya think lol (-; , just finishing the complete song version now, will post when done. (-:@salettesiao

Nice โ•โ•๐ŸŒŸ

@lewis123 nice one man (-:

Love it!

Thanks @Stablish ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘

@GroundB nice one, just made it in to a song, will post as soon as I have checked it over a few times. Really thankful for the kind words (-:

@Stablish wow! Can't wait to hear it!!

@Stablish is it for anyone special ????

P.s it's brillent

@Stablish nice poem man! :D can't wait to hear the song either :) keep up the good work

@ben_leggatt nice one mate thanks so much.(-:

u r so cool xxx

@Stablish no problem mate :)

@tobuscus aww thank you, really appreciate it.(-:

Looks like you have a lot of likes on this piece you should write more and see how they go โ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

Yeah I've done a full song version of this just a minute ago, wait for some feed

Feedback from that then write some more, nice one for the support mate. (-:

@Stablish you are really goooooooood โ•โ•

@speed577 sorry mate only just seen your comment, that parts a secret. (-; thanks for reading(-:

Lovely, pulled

It pulled at my heart strings!

@Mizou thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it (-:

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