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Love Forever Waits (ballad)

This is the song i have just made out of the poem i wrote earlier. Ive been over it a few times, hopefully there are no mistakes, or few should i say. This Is my first song i have ever written I hope you like it.

XSTABLISHX

(Verse 1)

If heavens here on earth,

It's there in your embrace.

I've been waiting here since birth girl,

Just .. to see your face.

Your so beautiful it scares me....

That your lips I will never taste.

And i don't think there's no one-else here who can take your place.

But If the world should stop here today,

I know I won't be afraid,

Because there's a voice thats telling me,

That my love forever waits.

(chorus)

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

(Verse 2)

If heavens real at all,

I know its here close to you,

Cos I can hear my name being called,

And I know that it's the truth.

Your so beautiful It fills me,

With a love that completes my soul,

And I can feel that it's so real it's completing me... I'm whole .

But if the world should stop here today,

I know i won't be afraid,

Because there's a voice thats telling me,

my love forever waits.

(chorus 2)

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

(Verse3)

So this is how I feel,

I hope that you feel the same.

Cos when your here beside of me girl,

There won't be no rainy days.

And this feeling just won't go,

So I really had to let you know.

Theres nothing left to describe it girl,

I'll just say how much I love you so.

So If the world should stop here today,

I know I won't be afraid,

Because there's a voice inside thats telling me,

That my love forever waits,

(chorus)

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

Forever waits,

My love forever waits,

And If the world should stop here today,

At least I know my love forever waits.

End

XSTABLISHX

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (39)

You really take time on your work… well done keep up the good work. 👌❔👍

@lewis123 cheers, I like to read it over a few times before I post just to make sure it reads ok. The songs and poems don't take to long to make themselves, i am well happy because I've only been writing full stuff for a week. All it takes is to believe you can do it. If you were ever to see my hand writing you would be shocked, it's really scruffy and all over the place.lol thanks for your comment. (-:

It's not all about the handwriting my Is not the best but I think you should make this your career in the future it could leed somewhere just take it slowly for now see how things go on this app then if it goes well the post your work off to a writing publisher company and who knows you could be famous❕❕🎶🙏 if you do and you read the stuff you wrote out then I will be one of your first fans to listen / buy and read it… good luck @Stablish

😂😂😭😭it's so good it made me cry, you're the best @Stablish

👏👏👏

@speed577 wow thank you so much, (": . Glad you like it. (-:

No thank you

I mean no,thank you

@lewis123 It means the world to me to know you like it so much, yeah i will just keep posting on here and see what feedback i get. I used to be able to sing well so hopefully I can get some posted on you tube as well, it's all about the people who read and comment tho, without you lot my words would never have been read. Thanks and keep posted. (-:

If I could do one a day that's a good rate lol, hopefully wont lose inspiration, theres a world full of it on here luckily tho.(-:

It's beautiful :)

It's not thanks to me it's thanks to all of your fans and your talent to write and sing!! Keep it up!

This song is really good!

It's so amazing because I can't do any let alone writing a song.

Mine would just come out looking like a bl***y piece of crap!

@riafuzzball thanks mate, I'm not going to stop now. (-: , you should keep at it, you never know when something good will come out. (-:, I really apreciate the support.

@PoppyA thanks poppy (-:

If you post a vid on YouTube tell me it's name @Stablish

Cheers @stablish

@speed577 will do buddy (-:

@riafuzzball no worries, keep posting yourself (-:

Tnx@Stablish

So beautiful!!! I almost cried! ;-(

@romarlyo You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. (": , I am very happy people like it. Hope you have a Lovely day. xx

@Stablish you've got such amazing talent. Talent aside I hope it's really helping you to write these poems/songs and express yourself. But this song was so beautiful. If you can sing you have to sing this

Thank you so much @Liza, I used to sing, will have to practice it and post on you tube. It will sound a lot better if I sing it how it's pictured in my head, I'm glad it's getting positive feedback i wasn't sure about posting something so soppy, but you only live once. Hope you've had a good day. (-:

@Stablish nice ballad mate :) have u thought about making a Facebook group or something to get more publicity? I know for one I would join that group or page or whatever :) if u do post some songs and stuff onto youTube let me know :)

@stablish awwh thanks and you're welcome :) xx

@ben_leggatt yeah for sure man, when some of my friend get back on i will point them in your direction, quite a few of them write stories so hopefully you will get some good feedback, take it easy fella. (-:

@ben_leggatt get a few more written first tho, and get my singing sharp again. (-:

@Stablish thanks man, and yeah, gd plan. Let me know if u do post them on YouTube and make a group on Facebook :) im on this most of the time :)

@Stablish I know this is really late, but I love this. What was your inspiration? I think you really have something here. I agree with @lewis123 you could totally become huge off of your writing.

@serenityeverard Where to start ? (-: , it's just about the love of your life, and how your destined to be together even if your yet to meet, and even if you don't meet in this life they would be waiting in the after life any way. Because your only separated for a short while but soul mates spend eternity together after death, pretty deep stuff but you could read into it any way you want, well that was i was going for anyway, I'm glad you like it. I just need to sing it and record it now. (-: will write more tho for sure. (-:

#What I was going for

@Stablish you should let me know when you have it recorded. I really love it. You are such an inspiration

@serenityeverard Oh and I can't forget to say thanks for liking it, I really appreciate your support being so far away geographically. (-:

@Stablish any time my friend. I hope every one on opuss gets the chance to see this.

@serenityeverard Thanks so much, i will let you know straight away, there is a studio very close, so just need to save some money and get my singing practice up. Can't wait to see your new posts, and i hope your parents are getting better. (-: Take care (-:

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