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Ordinary People

Danny

Running, heart pounding, I knew I had to get away. Trees scrape my face, tear at my neck as I crash through the creeping bushes. I can feel them screaming, making me wince in pain as my eardrum bursts, they're chasing me,
closer,
closer,
closer...

I wake with a start. My head drips with sweat as I peel back the clinging sheets. The nightmares keep happening. I don't know why. What have I done? I stumble to the bathroom and douse my face with freezing water. Then something hits me.

There was a face in that dream, a young girl. Who is she? I don't recognise her at first, but then it dawns on me. Amie. The girl in white. Fear contorts my brain. I don't want to think back to that day. The day my dad was murdered...

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I'm just an average teen who loves expressing my emotions through words and my inspiration is the world.

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Sound like a good start. Wish I could write like that

Yeah good start, keep it up. (-:

Wow sounds awesome x

Really good u can really explain love to right like that keep going x

This is mega good! Why don't you feature people on here in it.....? Like me and other people ect.... ;) ;) x

@WildOneKezza or are you dping it using only two people like mine??

Rather than using two people I am doing every chapter a different person, like a big chain that all links together. I hope it works!!! :)

@TigerLover Sounds interesting...

Xxx :) wow

Xxx :) wow

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