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Crucifix

It was laying in the long grass, somewhat useless and forlorn, and she hadn't even noticed that she'd lost the cross she'd worn.

In fact today she had felt lighter, with a new spring in her step, unaware a heavy burden had since fallen from her neck.

Now Jesus lay there in the grass, still nailed upon his cross, as she went about her business, lifted from some sense of loss.

She felt peaceful in the morning, as the new day did begin, instead of being nailed up with him, for some imaginary sin.

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Unique - And very good ^_^

Thank you again ;)

@Weirdwolf fabuloso sir 😊

@leelee101 ;) I thank you Sir :D

@Weirdwolf Your welcome, anytime ;)

Great stuff !

Wow little bit blasphemous but cool weird I definitely like 😄

@Weirdwolf that was cool, nice job! 😊

@aleishagayle20 ;) no doubt I'll burn in Hell 'cos I'm a very naughty boy :) Who's coming with me?

@ShaunJenkins Thank you Shaun :)

@TheCodsPollocks for some reason I thought you'd like that ;)

@Weirdwolf See ya in hell? :P

@CuriousCat The more the Merrier! :)

@Weirdwolf Haha indeed! Hell'll be fun, believe me :P

@CuriousCat it's gotta be better than any concept of heaven I can v

*Imagine

@Weirdwolf Heaven, paradise, whatever. In Hell we do whatever we want without concern! I'd rather do that :D

@Weirdwolf I've already embraced the dark side hell won't handle me 😉 and I bet you are bad boy 😘

@aleishagayle20 this will probably come back and bite me in the arse, but you are my Loreal ;)

@CuriousCat Me too! See you there! ;)

@Weirdwolf Woot! Cya there Wolf ;)

@Weirdwolf loreal? The shampoo? Lol might night you in the arse but no doubt you'd love it hehehe 😉😘

@aleishagayle20 Worth it ;)

@Weirdwolf arrggghhh hehehe lmao too funny 😘 you old charmer you x

@aleishagayle20 old? Don't rub it in :( lol :)

@Weirdwolf shush old as you feel 😉 I'll rephrase it for you, you very young charmer mwah 😘

@aleishagayle20 my heart melts in the comfort of your warmth ;)

Although this is a poem about a crucifix, it seems it's now became a flirt board.. :P

@CuriousCat lol, a what? Please excuse me, I forget myself ;)

@Weirdwolf Haha, I dunno, I'm just being silly~ ;P

@CuriousCat I'm glad you liked the poem, lots of people probably won't through on ingrained sense of guilt. Weird huh?

@Weirdwolf Indeed, but I do enjoy reading your poems. They're unique and always so good ^_^

@CuriousCat Thank you, I find sometimes, the depth oft thoughts, everything from alarming to zebra ;)

@Weirdwolf *my thoughts. This thumb needs a pointy bit :)

@Weirdwolf Your welcome, anytime! No worries - I'm used to typos. I once made a really, really embarrassing one.. x-x

@CuriousCat What can we say @Weirdwolf is a charmer 😉

@Weirdwolf I'm sure it does 😘 great stuff love it as usual mwah

@aleishagayle20 ah, and there dawns the highlight of my day ;)

@aleishagayle20 Haha! Indeed so.

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