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The Wound

Originally written eleven years ago today:

A wound so deep has opened within my soul.
Tormenting me while I sleep, and waking me into a world so cold.

Something's missing every morning, as each new morning brings despair.
Something taken without warning, something precious no longer there.

I remember when you held me, I remember when you spoke softly to calm my dreams.
I remember when I expelled you, now no end to your exile it seems.

How I long for you to tell me, that I'm not a failure in your eyes.
How I long to see the compassion, you always gave me hadn't died.

A wound so deep has opened within my heart.
No chance to rebuild the bridges, that I had torn apart.

I miss you mum.

Weirdwolf

@Weirdwolf

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Comments & Feedback (7)

Omg so sad ๐Ÿ˜ข is beautiful ๐Ÿ˜˜

Your pieces are always so full of emotion. Pure, raw, true art. ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’—

This has brought a lump to my throat...so emotive and so full of angst...THANKYOU for sharing Hun ....๐Ÿ’”โค๐Ÿ’”

Mate now I know... Sorry my friend, keep remembering and she'll never truly be gone ๐Ÿ˜ขโค

๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’›

Sending you virtual hug..๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’‹

Beautiful. Missed this one. I believe that feelings can travel to those both with us in body and in spirit. If there is a sentiment in your heart, I am sure it has been received ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š

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