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Loss

The loss of someone you love
Is a crater of devastation
Full of empty words
Lonely places
Grieving faces

The loss of someone you love
Suffocates each breath
A heaviness in you
The weight of despair
Lays on your soul
Devours you whole

The loss of someone you love
Has you in a sorrowful grip
You are afraid to live
As life continues
You try to keep going
As pain is growing

The loss of someone you love
You'll only find solace in time
The void from their passing
Needs time to heal
It can't be rushed
Grief can't be hushed

©Kim Brown 1st December 2012

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (19)

😢💜💗💜 Hope you're alright sweetie 😘

@MrsS just been thinking about my beloved gramp...it will be 10 years in feb that he's been gone and yet he is still such a huge part of my life...not a day goes by that I don't think of him ....thanks for asking my sweet 😘❤😘

@sammielee46 @sarahgamal...mwahs for them lovely RP's 🌹🌹😘😘

@MrsS a bunch of flowers for the lovely lady for the kind RP 💐💐💐💐💐

Sending you Huggies 💪💪💪💪😘

😓Big hugs I'm sending your way 😘

@sjw I'm ok...but me and my friends got talking about my upbringing and I remember how without my nan and gramp, my life could have been so very different 😘😘

@crowncottage...thanking you lovely lady for the RP 😘🌹

@sjw a martini for the kind RP gorgeous 🍸🌹

@KikuHonda...thanks my sweet for the RP ...much appreciated 😘🌹🍸

@misslittleDHP your welcome 😘❤

Kim that's a beautiful beautiful write my lovely ❤❤❤ well done 👍🌹👏👏👏

@leelee101 thank you my sweet...and I appreciate the lovely RP ✨😘✨

A beautiful piece Kim, & so accurate 😔😘

@Fly10 why THANKYOU my sweet...😘🌹😘

Really lovely💓💓😘

@Stablish thanks Hun ❤😘❤

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@RichWithey all is good thanks Hun ...just remembering my dear gramp who had such a huge impact on my life...big mwah to you ❤❤❤

@georgiesmithyyy...thankayoo my sweet for the kind RP ✨💝🌹

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