Part Of The Crowd

al_ec • 41 followers

Do your snap backs and white tees
Make you feel the urgent need
To be a jerk
And make girls hurt
From their hearts
Down to their feet

You chill out with your bros
While she sits alone at home
Thinking of the guy that you could be

The clothes don't define the man
The man defines the clothes
So maybe make some rational on why you feel alone

I'll take you now
A step on back to a work I wrote back when
I noticed girls that felt the need to impress you type of men
And I bear a close question as the one I begged to them
Now read this title and tell me "friend":

How do you feel about these men?

#general #relationship-dynamics #social-commentary #toxic-masculinity

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Dear sir, I am writing just to clarify and clear up some points you keep, As it seems although you are quite far from needing sweeping off your feet.

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If you really want us to watch football, If you really really do, There are a few things you should and should 't do; Sit the hell down and don't shout in my ear.

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Feb 21, 2013 at 3:44 AM

This work was inspired by a comment from @vieromiro on my short poem, "Individuality".

Feb 21, 2013 at 3:45 AM

This work was inspired by a comment from @vieromero on my short poem, "Individuality". She pointed out that I needed to call out the guys as well and I agree.

Feb 21, 2013 at 3:57 AM

@al_ec aw youre a sweetheart haha I am digging this 💩

Feb 21, 2013 at 3:58 AM

Hahah thanks ;D @vieromero

Feb 21, 2013 at 4:03 AM

@vieromero thanks for the reports. I edited the end of the new poem because it sounded weird. Needed to tweak it a bit.

Feb 21, 2013 at 4:03 AM

Reposts*

Feb 21, 2013 at 4:04 AM

@al_ec yeah I usually post my stuff and edit the hell out of it afterwards haha :) and of course!

Feb 21, 2013 at 4:16 AM

Thanks for the repost @jamieson99 ! This is actually a follow up to my shorter one on girls called "Individuality" if you want to check it out.

Feb 21, 2013 at 11:06 AM

Well said and a nice follow on 👏👏👏😘

Feb 21, 2013 at 12:06 PM

@sjw thank you miss. Also thank you for all the reposts. Nice to wake up to my phone meowing ^.^

Feb 21, 2013 at 12:19 PM

It's a great feeling isn't it 😊

Feb 21, 2013 at 12:24 PM

That it is ;D @sjw

Feb 22, 2013 at 1:41 PM

@al_ec I enjoy this poem

Feb 22, 2013 at 1:42 PM

Thanks @jrhuff5 :)

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