Burning Desire

aleishagayle20 • 570 followers

I need to see what you've got, the lot, the shot, your hot spot,
Need the heat from that place, bring it closer to my face,
What we will do, I'll be for you,
What we will be, oh please let me see,
Yes you who starts my fire, lay back my burning desire.

#desire #general #passion #poetry

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smellyfingers

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:37 AM

Reminds me of a song.....come on baby light my fire, set the night on fire, by the doors

aleishagayle20

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:38 AM

@smellyfingers who? Lol nope hey didn't say was original lol just 3 mins of madness hey don't you like it? 😥

smellyfingers

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:41 AM

@aleishagayle20 yes me likes. The doors are my fav band, you should check them out, you will learn something in the words, for real ;-)

smellyfingers

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:42 AM

Google "awake the doors" very beautiful words ;-)

aleishagayle20

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:43 AM

@smellyfingers hehe okay will check them out 😃x

Weirdwolf

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:48 AM

No contemplation required :)

Weirdwolf

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:51 AM

Although I shall think about it some more I think, as dream.

Weirdwolf

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:51 AM

@Weirdwolf *I

aleishagayle20

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:55 AM

@Weirdwolf hehe okay 😜

aleishagayle20

Apr 21, 2012 at 12:46 PM

Well @Weirdwolf after little contemplation an dreaming what do you think?

aleishagayle20

Apr 21, 2012 at 12:51 PM

@smellyfingers Time to hesitate is through la la lol the doors are pretty cool for old people music 😜 hehe like it

smellyfingers

Apr 21, 2012 at 2:58 PM

@aleishagayle20 Lmfao check out "an American prayer" album. Jim morrison recorded it (him speaking his poetry) in Paris just before he died, then they found it and released it with music. X ;-)