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Concrete Jungle

Let's go down to the concrete jungle today,
There's so much to see and so many games to play,

Ever played shot em' up? Shoot drugs, shoot thugs,
Might even find someone to mug!

Pull the wings off a bug,

Or how about date rape jenga,
Abuse then use even if they refuse!

Maybe my favourite gang land chess,
Commit crime, make grime, take over each place over time,

Tequila, salt and a slice of lime,

Then theres teen baby boom,
Neglected baby, screaming save me, sorry that don't phase me,

Then again you should try tv mania it's all the rage,
The tv host with the most!
Jerry Springer, Maury maybe Jeremy Kyle.

Don't stress I know which ones best,
Benefits from the state, believe me it's great, warfare we rate,

Strangling exhaust, source earths resource, on the jungle you force,

No trees a skyline, pot hole landmine, no stars cold clocks tell the time,

Binge drink boiling, drug filled toiling, the earth we are spoiling,

Cigarette solitude

Puff....
Puff....
Puff...

Used to walk barefoot in the grass, used to walk through a forest of pine trees,
No smell from these plastic trees, swinging on this rear mirror labelled pine breeze,

No natural goods, No natural woods,

Nature the wonder of man, instead a skyscraper the plan, Im confused can't understand,

Instead of a flower bed, lay slabs of the dead,

Instead of visions of green, grey and black far as can be seen,

Instead of laughter and a smile, you tarmac the earth you defile,

Steps on brittle concrete, processed invitro meat, poisons and toxins we eat,

So come on lets go down to the concrete jungle today,
There's so much to see and so many games to play, it's really something you'll love it here!

Everything cold materialistic you'll love it here!

The games we play each and everyday you'll love it here!

So great once you get past the jumble,
Come along to the concrete jungle.

Adapted and altered from Ali Gartner and post was inspired by @smellyfingers.

aleishagayle20

@aleishagayle20

They call me Mistress and Priestess but I'm just me young crazy and free!

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Superb πŸ‘Œ

This is has a lot of similarities to a poem I've got by Ali Gartner also called Concrete Jungle-was it modelled on that? Well adapted if so πŸ˜‰

@glensaggs Thank you 😊

@Fly10 nope sorry never hear of him ☺ it came up in a comment earlier and I've heard the term 'concrete jungle' in Tupac's songs 😊 just elaborated on the title really 😊 and thanks glad you enjoyed it

Very good :)

@smellyfingers thanks for the inspiration 😘

@Weirdwolf Thanks hun glad you liked it ☺

It's very depressing :)

@aleishagayle20 Spooky! Seriously check poem I mentioned out & you'll see what I mean!😱

@Fly10 yeah serious I mainly read Shakespeare Blake Wordsworth etc I know need to get with the times lol need to go book shopping soon lol and I will 😊 thanks again

@Nom Lmao really? Ummmm I like it πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ΏπŸ˜‰

@Fly10 just found it in google 😱 that is major spooky what the hell lmao must have read it before maybe years ago lmao mental that's crazy stuff lol 😳

@aleishagayle20 I know! One paragraph is word for word what you've written! Maybe she's secretly stalking you...lol πŸ˜–

@aleishagayle20 And I prefer you version anywayπŸ˜‰

@Fly10 lmao hehe maybe lol I've changed post now so her names in it dont like to copyright other peoples work not my style lol πŸ˜„ and thanks glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒ

@aleishagayle20 tut tut plagiarism!

@aleishagayle20 lol it now looks like Ali Gartner was inspired by @smellyfingers !

@Nom ☺ don't lol didn't mean too stupid brain remembers random things and forgets the bits I actually need lmao I'm very sorry really didn't mean to πŸ˜”

@aleishagayle20 haha I'm teasing, it's better than anything I could write anyway :)

@Nom lol you write good stuff and stop it lol or I'll have to cyber punch you lol I'll amend it now ☺

@aleishagayle20 Blimey you on some epic journeys today babe, lol good stuff as always ;-) xxxx did I inspire someone famous? Lol x

@smellyfingers lmao no I did change it you inspired me too write it and used a sentence from a poem and yeah guess so minds everywhere lol glad you like it mwah 😘😘

@aleishagayle20 first class! Amazing! 😘

@becominghuman Thanks cutie glad you like it 😘

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