For the women you're all stars
This is just too show you what you are
Women who are mothers
The ones that are constant lovers
A woman who's a sister
Such a beautiful female picture
A woman who's a daughter
One who brings the laughter
Ladies were just the same
Regardless of whether others want to name
Stand up tall
Take on them all
Ladies stand up strong
We've struggled for far too long
Shine and shimmer like the stars you are.
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Brilliant tone and a good vibe read but is it not an imperative toward women accepting the labels put on them? Ignoring that they could get the label 'prime minister' and to accept 'mum' or 'lover' instead? Great write, thought provoking. ๐
@Thebeautifulundead yes I can see that but these are the feminine roles we can't really hide from lol and I thought theses apply for just woman I could write another this was just two minutes of madness for me and a friend mainly thanks for your feedback greatly appreciated
@Freez thank you ๐ I'm glad this was mainly for a friend don't worry I'll do one for the boys too when I get a chance ๐
@aleishagayle20 haha no need I also try to write others out of an abyss. Yours was articulate and certain words caught my eye
@aleishagayle20 this is why I could never understand why guys could treat girls so poorly: "only string Spartan give birth to strong spartan men" it's from the love and care of women that I am who I am.
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