I don't let you see I'm breaking
That my heart is being torn
If what I'm saying hurts at all
It pains me ten times more
You say that it's okay
But it's not alright for me
I'm doing this for both of us
I know we must be free
If I abandoned common sense
And let emotions run
I'd be in your arms tonight
Not telling you we're done
I stare with softened sadness
At your blank, unchanging face
Whispering 'I'm sorry'
As I slowly walk away...
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We know it's over. Wishing now time is slower. Ending a chapter. Full of pain more than laughter. It hurts to be together. Just as much as it hurts to be apart. I know we planned it to be forever.
this is a goodbye. this is not a see you later. this is not a linger in my life. this is a leave. this is a good bye. I'm letting you leave. this is your one and only out.
At last I see that love does end. No need for regrets and no need to defend. We have been pretending for far too long. And now it's time to end this sad song. We no longer look at each other and talk.
As I stand in the doorway watching you walk away I couldn't help but think of all the years we had been together and everything we had been through,.
I look up to your eyes, but the sparkle and light that once was in them are gone. They look almost a clouded grey, almost as if a horrible storm is beginning in your mind.
Walk away from us, While we both can still stand, You have so much to confess, You've thrown away everything we planned. And for what. Some girl you say you love.
We've known for some time this heartache was coming. Waking up on opposite sides of the bed every morning. Pretending the love still burns in the light of a youthful flame.
#movement I've closed the book on our lives We were no longer together. The final chapter had no words Just silence in stormy weather. No longer on the same page The ink had all but dried.
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