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The Decision

#household - door knob

His hand hovered above the door knob,
Unsure of what to do.
Should he leave all he'd ever loved,
Break out and start a new?
Or could he fix what he'd just broken,
The heart of that young girl,
Who now sobbed behind him,
Her mind lost in a whirl.
She'd never once betrayed him,
She'd loved him with her all,
And she hadn't seen it coming,
Never guessed that trust would fall.
But the things he'd just admitted,
The disloyalty and lies.
Had cut her to the core,
He could see that in her eyes.
To see the pain he'd caused,
Was more than he could stand.
So with his mind made up,
He moved his hovering hand.
It gripped onto the door knob,
And with one final look...
He turned the wretched knob,
And out the door he snook.
Little did he know though,
The power of that sever.
For it took her fragile heart,
And broke it for forever.

©brownowl2012

brownowl2012

@brownowl2012

22, Currently studying an MSc in Applied Geospatial Information Science at Aberdeen Uni but like to fiddle about with a bit of poetry & short stories in my spare time. Have had mild Cerebral Palsy since birth but I don't let it stop me doing things I want :)

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Awww,very touching and sad. Great writing.❤

Awesome, nice pace, love this

Nice one hun 👍❤

Awesome stuff, pulling on my heart strings Fiona! 💚💔💚💔

A fab write...very bittersweet👏👏👏👏

Excellent write!!! 10/10 😃👍

@KikuHonda @Munford @leelee101 @naaviie @misslittleDHP @Weirdwolf Aww thanks everyone 😘 Kind of mixed emotions about this one as I like the rhythm I created but the piece is based on what happened to me last year and it really doesn't show my ex in very good light 😳 I seem to write best though when I channel memories like this!

I love the way you channeled the emotion, and don't worry, exes often don't come off in a good light! 💚

@naaviie 😊 I know they don't, I'm just not very good at being nasty about mine!

Aww you are too nice! Haha 💚

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