Rosie looked in to his deep, dreamy eyes, lost in a world of her own. How could she have fallen in love with him so quickly? The bell echoed around the room and Brian flipped his flicked hair out his face slowly. He turned and winked at Rosie, "see you in a bit, Ro." he said. Rosie's heart skipped a beat, she couldn't believe it. She smiled back and ran off, with a rather red face. Just as she was running she tripped over Alex Vuston's huge foot, she fell straight onto her face. Brian ran up to her, pulled her up and hugged her. "I think she's unconscious miss, get her a chair!" he yelled. After she was dragged onto a chair she awoke, Brian at her side. "what happened?" she asked. Brian told her about how she had fell and what he did, he then said,"can I speak to you outside in a bit?" Rosie, still in pain, smiled and nodded. She couldn't wait!
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Very good! Some advice though - don't take this to offence but it was slightly boring something better and more interesting needs to happen! I would love to hear about it when you have gotten further on!
@iamallama I'm getting there and thank you for the advice, something will happen in the next part :D
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