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An Unforgettable Fire

A first love
Created that spark
We wanted to be rebels
And leave our mark
We'd walk like we were one
Hand in hand
We were worlds apart
Parents didn't understand
You were the bad boy
I was too good
I couldn't wait for tomorrow
But I knew you would
Music was your first love
Art was mine
We'd talk for hours
Lost track of time
We shared everything
Experienced it all
You took what you shouldn't
And I watched you fall
I picked you back up
No longer a drowning man
Pride in your life
Was now your plan
I'd wait for you
By the bus stop
Even if you were late
I knew you'd never drop
Winters early snow
Octobers chilling breeze
We'd walk the streets at night
Then kiss under the moonlit trees
I still remember those
Cold winter nights
New Years Day playing on your stereo
Even now it ignites
Exploring each other
Like teenagers do
You told me you loved me
But I already knew
Words of passion
Fuelled by desire
We created our first
Unforgettable fire

Title inspiration from one of my favourite songs. The poem also contains many other titles from a group that influenced my teenage years.

eddie12309

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Very good hunny, that's a lovely piece. I count five, Unforgettable Fire, Drowning Man (my fave), Pride, October (2nd fave) and New Years Day. Love it. ❀ And of course, Good Morning πŸ‘β€β˜•πŸ˜˜

Moving piece! 🌟😘🌟

@leelee101 there's nine. πŸ˜„

@eddie12309 right I'm off to have a look... πŸ˜‰

One, tomorrow...

Desire...

And....

And Bad! Phew! It is early after all... Well done hunny! πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Well done. October is my second Fav... They all take me to a lovely place. πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

@ckahn thank you. πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Love this :)

@eddie12309 I've been with U2 from the very start and it's just all so good. The early stuff like Tomorrow and Another Time Another Place are just too good! ❀ I did one for the Rumours album, but you'd have to trawl a bit... Loving this one tho. β€πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 ok I'll have a look. It was my brothers live at red rocks that started it. But now I'm showing my age. Lol. πŸ‘πŸ˜‚

@redfae thank you and for the repost. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Aww love this πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›β€β€β€πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

@eddie12309 RED ROCKS! Oooooo don't set me off! I had a black sleeveless War Tour t-shirt.... sighs... πŸ˜‚β€πŸ‘

@leelee101 had a war poster on the wall. Ha. Have you seen them live? I camped out overnight once to get tickets. Oh those were the days before one click. πŸ˜‚

@minxyMolly thank you and for the kind repost. Glad you liked it. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ˜˜

@eddie12309 I'm gutted to say I haven't. Had a ticket for wembley in my hand once, but had to give it up, cash flow just wouldn't allow... 😒😒 Grrr... β˜•β€

@leelee101 sorry tried to go back and find it but it times out and resets. Grrrr. Enjoyed lots if your older stuff tho. πŸ‘πŸ‘

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@eddie12309 I'll put it up again later, just for you hun! #acorns should do it... Wonder why everyone's having trouble going back? πŸ‘β€

@RichWithey thanks. Glad you liked it enough to repost. πŸ‘ yeh I've seen them a few times from small venue to big stadium. As you say epic. 😘

@leelee101 ah... Lightbulb moment... Understand the acorns now. Doh!πŸ˜‚

@eddie12309 πŸ’‘β€

Love this piece even though I didn't get the references!! 😜

@naaviie thank you and stop boasting oh young one πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@naaviie and also thanks for repost. πŸ˜˜πŸ‘

Mwah! 😘

Fabulousβœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨

@misslittleDHP thank you mrs and for the kind repost 😘

πŸ‘ bravo! πŸ˜„

@pthasse thank you πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

@chickgamer πŸ’š

@eddie12309 that's so wonderful and sweet, I could almost see it. I loved it, thanks for showing it to me πŸ˜πŸ’—

@chickgamer aw thanks. I did have fun in between these two. 😜

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