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Insomnia

Won't settle down
Silently pacing

TAP TAP TAP
Despair has set in
Hours pass by
Pillow too thick, too thin

TAP TAP Tap
Dawn is nearly here
Sleep take over me
I have no more tears

TAp tap tap....

eddie12309

@eddie12309

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Comments & Feedback (8)

This pretty much me every night

Excellent description hun, spot on πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

Very clever with the TAP tap caps changing. Really supports your words to capture a restless night without sleep πŸ’šπŸ‘βœ¨

Really good! Relate to the bit about the pillowπŸŒŸπŸ’—πŸŒŸ

@pthasse @leelee101 @naaviie @ckahn thank you everyone and for any reposts πŸ‘πŸ’š

Don't cha just hate nights like that?!? Lol. So right on! πŸ‘β˜•πŸ‘πŸΆβ€

Superb again... How do you do it?🌟✨🌟✨

@sleepydragon aww thank you. Glad you liked it. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

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