Won't settle down
Silently pacing
TAP TAP TAP
Despair has set in
Hours pass by
Pillow too thick, too thin
TAP TAP Tap
Dawn is nearly here
Sleep take over me
I have no more tears
TAp tap tap....
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Very clever with the TAP tap caps changing. Really supports your words to capture a restless night without sleep ππβ¨
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