Man was cast out, for they didn't take heed
And so here is the story, of original sin
Believe it if you will, this religious spin
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Original sin & an original piece too-great work lady (& cracking new pic π) Hope you're good π
@Fly10 thank you lovely. All good, but I think my time here is waning. Hope your ok and moving forward. Did you sort those bastards out? π
Still in throes of battle with those bastards, but at least they're out of the firm now π What makes you say time up? Have you just had enough? I've not been on here much, & don't anticipate I will be back to any great extent for a while. I'd hate to see you go though πx
That's good to hear. You've always sounded as though you have a strong head in your shoulders you'll win through in the end. Few reasons why. But I'm near the end of my maternity leave so wont have much time in my hands. π
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