You're In The Open

efflorecence • 92 followers

You took me for a fool
Well done you won
Charmed by your smile
Blind to what you'd done.

No longer will I cry
Nor continue to try
To get your attention at all
To catch me when I fall.

I thought you were different to those by your side
But I realise you only used them to hide,
The dick you are inside
You messed with my mind.

I'm no longer your toy
Find someone else to string along
I'm no longer your 'maybe'
Find someone else's misery to prolong.

Farewell my old friend
Who I used to wish to see
Goodbye I'm leaving you
So don't come looking for me.

#emotional-betrayal #heartbreak #rhyme #toxic-relationship

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Comments & Feedback (5)

Jan 12, 2013 at 11:06 PM

Powerful! I can really feel your heartache...

Jan 12, 2013 at 11:15 PM

Ooh! Can relate to this! Hope you're okay x

Jan 12, 2013 at 11:30 PM

Real venom here Emma, hope you're moving on ok 👏👏 Great stuff 👍❤

Jan 12, 2013 at 11:40 PM

Love the emotion in this 😘❤

Jan 13, 2013 at 12:13 AM

There's some raw emotion in this hugs powerful write

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