I turned over
Reached out
You were gone
Into my pillow
I cried
What did I do wrong?
Your lies
Did it again
I fell into your bed
The words
You spoke
Went to my head
I'm a fool
For believing
For trusting you again
I'm a fool
For hoping
Things would change
How could you?
Use me
Then walk away
How could you?
I'm a fool
That's all I have to say
©Kim Brown 3rd October 2012
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
I was blinded by ur smile. Are love seemed invincible. But what i didnt know was u had someone els thinken the same thing.
You played a game. I knew your name. Everything different. Yet still the same. I let you back. When I was slack. Unprepared. For your attack. I took your lies. Your alibis. But now it's time.
Your lack of conscience. Is quite alarming. You trample on hearts. And walk away too damn calmly. You fill your prey up. With declarations of a pure love. Then move on to the next.
You are the sunlight, the starlight and the moonlight. You showed my hopelessly blind eyes sight. You're a blazing fire in my world of darkness and desolation.
My mother can't even Look you in the eye, My father doesn't like you, And you know why. You took their daughter, And broke her heart. They never trusted you From the start.
My heart is being ripped in two. My stomach is feeling it too. There was a love that was once strong. Now it is just dark and blue. My heart it beats still. But only for you. Which breaks me heart.
The fog rolls in and fills his weeping eyes. The love he had has surely died. She was his first, he was putty in her hands. He made her feel special, met all of her demands.
His name was James,. He just turned 16,. His eyes were like dancing flames,. And his mouth was so mean,. How silly of me to fall for someone like this,. He started off fine,.
@minxyMolly @eddie12309 @sarahgamal purely fictional my sweets....I'm a happy camper my sweets 😃😃😃😃😃
@misslittleDHP think this should be banned from the competition lol 😉 O the guy in this is a w@ haha assuming its a guy lol x
@MrsS ha ha...sorry to scare you Hun ....just a reflective fictional piece...based on a guy from my past...asshole from the past...just spruced it up into poetical form...lol...hope all is ok your end my sweet 🌹🌹
@RichWithey @sjw @MrsS @leelee101 ....mwahs and huggies for all your kind reposts my sweets 😘😘😘💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
@misslittleDHP I guess I've been alright. I've just kind if been going crazy lately. I'm soooooooooo busy!!!!!!
@misslittleDHP Thank you so much for all the kind words!!!!!!!! It really means a lot to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :')
@misslittleDHP haha! Opussian lynch mob... we'd never get anything done, we'd all be too busy describing the lynching...😂😂😂
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