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White Dream Chapter 3

It was 10am, and at 10.30am i need to be at restaurant. I never gonna make it! I need to meet with my mother, for Sunday breakfast, I guess I can avoid that this sunday, she will be so pissed(evil laugh in my mind). She wanted to control every second of my life, so I moved out when I was 18. I love my new apartment, it was my dads gift for me. So cool! Ok, I guess I need to call her, and say that I'm sick or something...

-Hello?- She answered, omg, what should I say?
-Um.. Hi mom.- I said with panic in my voice. - I just wanna tell you...
- I'm not going for breakfast today, and you are coming to diner at our place, at 7pm. Don't be late, and dress something nice.
- what? Mom, I can't... - pyp pyp pyp... She hang up. Oh, come on...

That's why I hate to talk to her, she never listens me. Ok, than I guess no rush for breakfast. I need to go to some shops to buy myself cute dress, I guess I just love buying new stuff. I went to my closet, it was over filled, so cool. Ok, I dressed sweet peachy color dress and black high heels, took my purse and went out.

after few hours

I was rushing home, and only thing in my head was that dinner party. Why she is asking me to come?

When I got back home at 16pm, I wasn't hungry so just I turned on my computer and radio. In computer I just checked some tickets to ireland, just in case. Today, that dream was not so important for me I guess, I got other concerns. But the boy I just couldn't forget. Suddenly radio started playing song, different kind of song. It was so beautiful! I just had to download it on my phone. I typed song name into google. Jedward-waterline. Somewhere I heard that name, Jedward. Oh, what ever. I need to get ready for that dinner party..

After an hour I left home, looking perfect, how my mother wanted my to see.

** thanks for reading :) please leave a comment. I should write next part today too. ;) E~

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Comments & Feedback (10)

Nice, still a few mistakes though.

Love the story plot do far :)

Great so far!

:D d

Very good,

This is a great idea for a story and you wrote the events well. Is English your first language? There are just a couple of grammar/spelling typos that could be cleaned up with a quick edit. Otherwise this is good writing - keep it up! I'm interested to see what will happen.

@naaviie Thanks :* no English is not my language :D I'm still learning it, I'm studying English for 6 years in my school:)

Then this is seriously impressive to have written in a second language!! Well done!! I think my best advise would be for you to keep reading all the other posts on Opuss, there are some great writers here and you will learn a lot about spelling, grammar etc! Best of luck with your continued work.

:)@naaviie I hope u will read my story

@RowebotHatchling @Nicholas @Georgiastar @naaviie chapter 5 posted. Enjoy:)

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