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That Day

The day after the day wasn't the day
In fact it was nothing like that day in any way

It was as if that day never happened at all
Almost like it had been blocked by a brick wall

In my mind it seemed to have glossed over
Just a tiny little star in a huge supernova

Life goes on and the days disappear
Leaving memories in your mind still dear

No going back and no pointless stalling
A feeling of Empty and constantly falling

gazplend

@gazplend

30 something,Staffordshire, England, never judge a cover by its book.

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I really like this but I'm not sure why. Really well written, thank you!

Had to read it a few times to put the days in order didn't mind though as its a nice read. Even though its very deep 😢

😥 Yeah deep sad write 😥

Very deep babe! Love it do you need some hugs? xx

:( chin up honey! Great write :) x

Deep and swirling, mind in a whirl? Keep smiling... 😘😘💜❤💜

Reiterating what other peeps have said my sweet...deep and emotive ...❤😘❤

@rhona maybe it reminds you of a bad day once? Thankyou! And thankyou for your thankyou! 😘

@tetti2 thankyou terri,confusingly deep and meaningful was my aim ❤😘

@sarahgamal but peppered with positives ❤😘

@sjw always babe! Thankyou,you remember that day 😢 we all have them 😘xx

@sammielee46 I'm ok Sam 😊and thankyou lots ❤😘

@MrsS it's about all the bad days I've ever had in my life rolled into one 😢 thankyou Caroline ❤😘

@misslittleDHP just what I was going for lovely Kim 😊 thankyou 😘❤💐

@gazplend good :D and my pleasure honey :) x

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