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Part 2

Two days since Graham had buried Thorn in the garden and things were not getting any easier. Hazel had shown absolutely no emotion when the dirt was shoveled on to the lifeless Thorn in the cold hard frosty ground on a winters morning in early December. True to form Hazel had said that BB was responsible for what had happened. Sue and Graham were beside themselves with worry about their daughter. "She needs help love, something ain't right with her head. I mean Jesus fucking Christ she's only seven and she killed our fucking dog, I just don't know what the fuck to do, I think she needs help, professional help" Graham said as he took his second bottle of red from the fridge and poured another large glug of wine into his empty glass. Recent events had hit Sue hard, she had become almost overnight depressed and would sit and stare at her daughter showing no emotion whatsoever.

Graham could often hear Hazel whispering at night after he had put her to bed. This had turned into (what he could make out through the wall) whole conversations with the occasional giggle coming from his daughter. When he would walk into her room unannounced to catch her talking she would always be asleep or at least pretending to be. It was as if she was always one step ahead of him. Sue was getting more and more depressed each day and was prescribed some powerful anti depressants that although she said they were helping Graham could see that she was getting worse. She had got into the habit of not washing or looking after herself properly and was looking extremely depressed. Graham was at his wits end, "A break from this house is what we need" he thought to himself "Yeah a nice little break somewhere far away might make things better".
If only he knew.

Part 3 has been deleted. So this is now the end haha.

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No problemo mate! Been waiting for this. Excellent, can't wait for pt. 3 πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

@leelee101 cheers mate I've not been on here for a while so thought I'd better get writing again πŸ˜ƒ

Can't wait for part 3 πŸ˜„πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ’™β€πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly thanks should be up this week πŸ˜ƒ

I love this and it's a friggin exorcism she needs! πŸ‘Ώ

@sjw ha yeah I agree lol thanks for reading πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜„πŸ˜Š

Great stuff. Are we going to see some exorcism. Part 3 please...... Oh and do you keep red wine in the fridge?πŸ‘ΏπŸ˜³

@eddie12309 I always keep it in the fridge lol I don't think she needs an exorcism, all will be revealed, thanks for reading πŸ‘πŸŒŸπŸŒŸ

Looking forward to part 3...β€πŸ’šβ€

I'm definitely intrigued now. Can't wait😳

Looking forward to part 3!!

@glen good to have you back sir. πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

@leelee101 thanks mate, glad to be back although I am now rank 209 haha

@glen doesn't matter mate. You're BACK πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

Love this Glenneth! :) x

Amazing!!πŸ’™πŸ’œ I NEED part 3

@evil13duck cheers I'll try for next week at some point. I'm so lazy πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ thanks for reading πŸ˜ƒ

Late to the party again, great stuff hopefully I catch part 3 when it's fresh.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish if I ever get round to it mate lol I can't think how to end it I've been putting it off for ages now⚽⚽⚽

Fuck have I missed bb part 3 yet πŸ˜₯ 😘

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@minxyMolly haha no I haven't wrote it yet been busy, gonna try for next week πŸ˜œπŸ˜„

@glen can't wait! πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

Please continue this and Dead End

@callz I'm glad someone likes em lol yeah I'm gonna try this week mate πŸ˜ƒ

@glen yes (it's @Dj-Mac btw) I can't get on my account but read the story Ironic under this name I (Dj-Mac) wrote it

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@DiamondGhost part 3 will be written at some point lol I'm so lazy πŸ˜ƒ

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@minxyMolly @sjw @eddie12309 @misslittleDHP @hamz @evil13duck @minxyMolly @callz @DiamondGhost massive tag πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ well I've done part 3 at last

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