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Black's V Red's

Let's go back to my garden again, just outside the door
The red and blacks are fighting again, but this ain't no racial war
The ants come marching two by two, on there way to fight
Red and black hate each other, they want to end this tonight

There's two ants in this battle, both on either side
Ones red the others black, but its there love they have to hide
Nips is black and Pips is red, they met just by the swing
They knew it wasn't supposed to happen, but ant loves a powerful thing

Their family's always fight like this, it happens every day
Nips and Pips met in the battle and together they run away
They got as far as the pond and in despair they looked around
They had made a great escape, they never made a sound

But things don't work out, for this unlucky in love pair
Red and blacks don't mix, there love they shouldn't share
They knew it couldn't last, Pips was the queens daughter
So they sat by the pond then jumped, together into the water......

glen

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International phenomenon β„’ terrible poems with terrible jokes, I don't know what I'm thinking as I've been on the smokes...

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Oh no! 😱 insect suicide pact ahoy! πŸ˜‚ Great stuff mate! πŸ‘πŸ»

@leelee101 haha the bug version of Romeo and Juliet lol cheers mate

Oooo I could see this as a tragic love story on the stage!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw haha me to lol cheers πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Brilliant....I thought I was the only one who watched bugs in my garden...lol...πŸ›πŸπŸŒΎ

@misslittleDHP haha thanks πŸ›πŸ›πŸ›πŸπŸπŸ‚πŸ‚

Haha cute!πŸ›πŸ› I loved how it followed Romeo and Juliet!

Brilliant. Love your stuff πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 thanks a lot πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Noooo Romeo and Juliet ants! How frustrating! πŸ˜‚πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ‘πŸ‘

@naaviie haha thanks πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸŽΆ

Wicked!

@BearScribbler cheers mate πŸ˜ƒ

Brilliant! Very romantsy πŸ˜‚ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œ

They should make a film out of this! I shall forever look at ants in a different light...πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 it would def win an Oscar lol πŸ†πŸ˜˜

It would! And the sequel could be Ghost Hunter Ants-now there's an acid trip thought!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Awww! Maybe they float! πŸ’—πŸ˜‚πŸ’—

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