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When you dip her in the middle of the dance floor, it is the color of her dress.

When she whispers in your ear, it is the color of her lips.

When you make love, it is the trace you want her to leave all over your body.

When she places her palm over your heart, it is the color that comes to the surface as her fingertips trail like a sentence that can never be finished.

When you see her in the bedroom with another, it is the color of your breath.

When you smash the vase in the hall, it is the color that threatens to abandon the shattered pieces.

When you scream at the top of your lungs, it is the color that pierces the atmosphere.

When she hears you, it is the color of her pulse.

When you look into her eyes for the last time, it is the fading color of your heart falling to your knees. It is not the color you see when she leaves.

gocky

@gocky

Hello I don't know how to initiate contact with people. Very much in love, very much a mess. Don't worry, I'd unfollow me too if I could.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

@eddie12309 I know I'm terribly late. I just wanted to write about color so I did. So this is just a thing I did. 😊

@crowncottage thanks for the repost! 😊😊

@jamtots thanks alot for the repost 😊

No your not late but the colour was ebony. I really enjoyed this though great colour associationπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.

@eddie12309 yeah I see well then just consider it as me being inspired by your challenge haha. Thank you very much, and thanks for the repost. You're so kind 😊

@gocky no worries. You still have time to do another if you want.

@eddie12309 sorted :)

Brilliant first line. πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great piece. πŸ‘

@leelee101 wow, thank you very much 😊

Love this πŸ˜πŸ‘

@gocky no worries, it's all true πŸ‘

@sjw thank you!! 😊

Wow really awesome πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@NayAriBella thank you so much! 😊😊

@sammielee46 @ashhkat thanks for the repost you guys 😊

@gocky my pleasure I loved this πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

@tetti2 thanks for the repost! 😊

@sarahgamal thanks for the rp 😊😊

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