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The Story Of You And I

I remember the look you gave me when our eyes first met, like a child examining a present she couldn't afford or an artist falling in love with a painting she never thought she'd complete.

You allowed me to resurface from the land of the lost, breathing life into a decaying piece of work.
You explored every piece of me, as I opened your eyes and forced you to cross the line between fantasy and reality.

Words became roses and roses bloomed to meadows. You felt the wonder when we touched and took me under.

I was in the realm of your vulnerable lies, you skimmed and notated and read between my lines. As soon as the last page gave way to the cover I knew what was imminent, and I knew it meant disaster.

You were a curious little thing, dressed in innocence and authenticity when in fact you weren't planning to own me. I was a mere library book that you checked out with some cheap plastic card, stamped with a due date for you to forget and discard.

Re-shelved and forgotten, you never looked back as you picked up a new book and gave him the same look that I thought was privileged to the story of you and I.

gocky

@gocky

Hello I don't know how to initiate contact with people. Very much in love, very much a mess. Don't worry, I'd unfollow me too if I could.

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Absolutely beautiful piece of work! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ well done you ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

@onedirection19 aaaw thank you! Means alot โค

@gocky no problem! Amazing work like this deserves to be acknowledged! โค

Brilliant!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ‘

@ashhkat thank you so much! :)

A phenomenal piece...cleverly and superbly written ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ‘โœจ๐Ÿ‘

@misslittleDHP wow thank you! You saying that means alot really! โค๐Ÿ˜Š

Love this!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜€

@misstezaa thank youuu! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

@gocky this is the best piece I've read in a while, short and perfectly formed, stunning metaphors that fit just perfectly. I wish I could like it 20 times!!! ๐Ÿ˜

@Irrational_Kimmi oh my god! That makes me so happy, I can't thank you enough. Maybe we have been through similar stuff lately. Anyway, thank you for real. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

@gocky pleasure! It's a brilliant piece

Can't believe I missed this it's beautiful ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw you are so nice, thank you very much! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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