When you look at me.
Do you see me?
When I look at you.
I see you.
When you hear me.
Do you listen to me?
When I listen to you.
I hear you.
When you touch me.
Do you feel me?
When I touch you.
I feel you.
When you speak of me.
Do you understand me?
When I speak of you.
I understand you.
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A kitten that writes? ... Yeaaaah ... Like that would ever happen!
I think you could fall in love with anyone if you saw the parts of them that no one else gets to see. If you followed them around, even for a day, like a blessed ghost.
The eyes are windows of the heart Wherein transparency will show A myriad feelings to impart From where in sadness, tears do flow.
I feel commas would be more appropriate, rather than the full stops. They'd add a certain continuity to the piece rather than the stop-start effect of constant full stops. Aside from that - very nice! :)
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