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Advice...

When you look at me.
Do you see me?

When I look at you.
I see you.

When you hear me.
Do you listen to me?

When I listen to you.
I hear you.

When you touch me.
Do you feel me?

When I touch you.
I feel you.

When you speak of me.
Do you understand me?

When I speak of you.
I understand you.

iPuss

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A kitten that writes? ... Yeaaaah ... Like that would ever happen!

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Love this one, touching and eloquently put 💚✨💚✨

A thoughtful and very sweet write my lovely❤❤❤

@naaviie What does eloquently mean again?

Fluent, forcefully, appropriate and expressive use of language 😜

I feel commas would be more appropriate, rather than the full stops. They'd add a certain continuity to the piece rather than the stop-start effect of constant full stops. Aside from that - very nice! :)

@jacooo Its a good thing I wrote it then huh :D I wanted it that way tbh. Because im blunt..

@jacooo Thanks for the compliment though x

@iPuss Fair enough ^_^ and no worries

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