I think you could fall in love with anyone if you saw the parts of them that no one else gets to see.
If you followed them around, even for a day, like a blessed ghost.
For a day, you saw them crying in their bed at night; learnt the pattern of their breathing like they would remember a song - singing to themselves as they make a sandwich; just walking along the street and their eyes catch the light and become an open book.
Even if they were introverted, strange, disagreeable, or had nothing. I think after seeing them at their most vulnerable you wouldn’t be able to help falling in love with them.
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@Sawyer Look were all cool on this website, and of you're saying that I didn't come up with this idea you're right but it's my writing. So if it looks familiar, that's not my fault. But I promise you if it sounds familiar I didn't know. I always credit it if it's by another author. Common man.
@Reine your explanation doesn't even make sense. I'm not here to cause any offence, the coolness of Opuss and it's people are one of the reasons I'm here, but taking credit for someone else's work isn't cool. Just my opinion, but the strongest of opinions can't lie down until they've been heard. I wish you luck with your writing, sincerely I do, but try to find 'your' voice.
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