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One of oldest poem I wrote when I was juz a kid #death #void #collapse #deathorlife #life #liveordie
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You are running or walking
First thing to go is legs
They begin to feel wobbly
They go numb in a second
Your body begin to go numb
But you can feel yourself falling
As you watch yourself slowly falling
You screamed to yourself "STOP!"
But no respond of movement came
No reflex responded
There is nothing you can do about it
But watching yourself helplessly falling
And soon, you hit your head on ground
Everything go black,
All alone, and scared
You wonder to yourself,
"Where am I? What is happening"
"Why is everything black?"
"Am I just blackening out?"
"Is this world of coma"
"What if....... I died"
"Have I died yet?"

You start to realzied that life is so precious
Your story of life flashes in your mind's eyes
You start to decide if your life is worthy to live
Is it worthy to live a life or worthy to die
Let it all flush down the toliet without a fight
Where you wouldn't know if you will success
Where you wouldn't know if you are strong enough
To face the world of damned, to face the hell
And to win the war of thousands battles.
You decide, you live or you die...

insomnium

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