Goodbye Forever

My greatest creation,
That took me days,
Give them to my loved ones,
To hear what they say.

"you've done a great job!"
Is what I thought they would say,
And instead I get a stern face.
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Goodbye forever opussians. It seems like certain people say I haven't got the talent of writing . So i don't believe i belong here.This will be my last opuss. And I'm very sorry , I still haven't posted that story I told I was going to post a month ago. But I still won't . I just want one friendly favour from you all , just to answer this question :

Are my opusses really bad?

I Just want the truth , nothing else. Don't worry I won't feel bad :) just the truth , that's all I ask.

I will never forget you all. All the opusses you all have wrote. I just hope you all won't forget me.

Goodbye.

Bushra